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Repetition (i know, it's a cheezy story but i wrote it a yr ago so, i don't care. Xb)

My life was never anything but ordinary. I was just a typical girl... well, until a few weeks ago that is.

"Rachel!" my mom called. "Get ready for school! You're gonna be late!" I let out a deep sigh. "Coming! Just chill for a sec mom!" I yelled across the hall, gabbing my jacket to leave. "Rachel!" my mom screamed again. "Mom! Patience! I'm ready, okay?" I snapped Giving her a glare and getting into the car. My mom got in only a short time afterwards. After dropping me off at school, she didn't go home. Who knows what happened to her? All I know is that that was the last time I saw her.

There are many rumors of what happened. Some say she died somehow. Other's say she just had a hard time staying in that house after the divorce, but couldn't take me away from all my friends. But, none of them are true. The thing is, is that, a few days before, something happened to me. I became a sort of monster you see. She couldn't bear it. She even refused to look at me unless we were fighting, which we now did quite often. She left because she couldn't handle being around me. She couldn't stand to be near me anymore. She was afraid, as anyone would be when they learned that I was a vampire.

As time went by, it became harder and harder. I had to do everything not to harm anyone. But, what was I supposed to do? I didn't know how I became one in the first place, so how could I stop myself and turn into a regular human girl again? Now, here I am, just lying here crying. "Rachel? Rachel are you okay?" I looked up and wiped my tears away with my sleeve. It was Gabby, my best friend. "Ya! Of course!" I replied, trying to fake a smile and put in the happiest voice I could. She stared at me for a moment, trying to decide if she should let me be and pretend to believe me or help me out. "Rachel, you so do not look okay. You've been like this for weeks now." She let out a sigh. "Well, since your mom's gone I guess I can understand. Hey, maybe you can move in with me! I'm sure my parents won't mind." I felt a not in my chest. What was I supposed to say? I mean, I didn't want to sound rude by turning her down, but I also didn't want to end up eating my best friend at some point! She looked at me for a bit longer, waiting for a reply. "Well, if you don't want to you don't have to. I just thought it would be kinda fun." I nodded. My words were locked somewhere and I couldn't speak. No sound came no matter how hard I tried. "Okay." I mouthed, hoping I could cure myself before it was too late. Before I hadn't only lost both my parents, but Gabby too.


I lie there staring at the moon, trying to take in all that's happened lately. I got a call the other day from my half sister Elly, and a depressing one at that. Apparently she'd been living with dad. and well, let's just say there's was some bad news to deliver.

Hearing the phone ringing I ran down the hall and quickly grabbed it. "Hello?" I said drawing it to my ear. "Hi, um, is Mrs. Rosenburg there?" a voice asked, in a frightened voice. "Um, no. May I ask who's calling please?" I asked getting annoyed. Why don't people just say who they are before what they want? I let out a deep sigh or irritation. "This is Elly. Rach, that you?" "Ya. What's up El?" "Oh, nothing really. Uh, is your mom there?" I felt a surge of pain. "Oh... well you see... she kinda abandoned me...." I heard her gasp, though, from only the phone it's hard to know how badly someone feels. "Oh my God! What?!?! W-w-why!?!?" she shrieked. Great, the one unanswerable question. "You see... well, um... it's kinda a long story. Besides, you wouldn't believe me anyways." She sighed. "Well, I guess it's none of my business. So, anyways um.... something happened over here." she choked out. "What? W-what happened? Are you okay? Where are you? Dad's or your mom's?" "Well, Dad's. or..... what used to be dad's...." she paused. What used to be Dad's? What's that supposed to mean? Did he run off on her too like mom for me? Is she a vampire too??!?!?!?!?!? "You see...." she started. "Dad.... died..." I was frozen. No, no way! This can't be happening! "He.... he left a will. Th-the two of us share the house. But um.... how he died... well.... will you promise not to tell anyone." "Yes! Of course! You're my sister. Well, half sister, but, doesn't that make us closer? We fight less and share one parent yet get all the attention from the other so I mean-" I said when she cut off my blabbing. "Rachel... I-I-I killed Dad. It was me. I mean, I didn't mean to. It's just. Something happened to me.... I'm not human anymore Rach... I think.... I think I'm a vampire." she said crying. I froze. Her too?!?! "Rach? You there?" she asked. "Ya, ya, I'm here. It's just that.... that's why mom left me.... so am I..."


I called Gabby the other day on the plane here, explaining why I wouldn't be at school and I wasn't moving in with her family. She understood. But, the thing in, she really doesn't. She hasn't a clue, that though this may upset her, it's safer for me to be with another of my kind, another monster, so that I don't kill her, as El did Dad.

There's someone walking towards me. He has pain skin, like Elly's and my own. Is he a vampire as well? He looks cute, like one of the guys at school that all the girls swoon over, but better somehow. I can't explain it, or even explain why he's walking this way. "Hey! Hey, you! Who are you?" I called out. He didn't reply. Instead, he just continues walking. He's really close now and- "Rachel? Rachel are you okay? Rachel wake up!" Elly shouts me looking worried. "Huh? What happened?" "Rachel, you were screaming in your sleep. That is seriously not normal." I was.... screaming? O, that's right! The boy! He looked about a year older than me in my memory, I'd guess he was 14. Who was he? But, oddly as it is, he seamed familiar, as if I've met him somewhere.

I grab my backpack and wait for a bit. About fifteen minutes pass and I know something's up. "El? You almost ready." I yell when she walks down the hall still in her pajamas. "What are you making such a big fuss about this early in the morning." she says yawing yet sounding slightly amused. I give her a look of astonishment. "Um, school, duh. It's Monday, remember?" I ask. She sighs and I'm still confused. "Dude, your mom abandoned you and our dad died. You expect the teachers to think we'd show up? We have the week off, they called this morning while you were still sleeping. I still don't know how that didn't wake you." she states. Heh, I always have been a deep sleeper. I set my backpack down and turned to face her. "So, since we have the day off, what shall we do?" I ask grinning. Hmm... all the choices... I'd say we go shopping, go to a movie, get manicures and pedicures then- "I dunno..." Elly replies, bursting my thought bubble. "I kinda already have plans...." she admits. My curiosity is now at it's peak. Vampires can't have plans with anyone, it's way too dangerous. Especially for someone who murdered her own father. "O? With whom?" I ask, ready to start and interrogation. She blushes a deep red, like, tomato red. "Well.... his name is Danny." "Ooooooey! Is he cute?" I ask. She blushes even harder. "Well... ya... well just see for yourself! He's picking me up soon." she says trying to stop smiling. "O! I'd bet hurry up!" she says and runs to get changed. I hear the doorbell and run down to answer. "Coming!" I call and open the door.

O. My. God. O my God. O my. O my. O my God! My heart is racing and I can barely speak. I-I-It's him. I just stare at him and he looks confused. "Uh, hi. Is uh, Elly here?" he asks throwing me back to reality. "O, uh, ya. She'll um, be right down." I say a little to quickly. "Danny." he says putting his hand out. "Rachel." I reply and shake it. He seams a little more comfortable. "O! So you're the half sister she's been talking about lately. So, you know that I'm a.... right?" I think for a moment. What is he talking- o! Now that he mentions it, he doesn't smell edible like a human nor does he have tanned skin. "Ya, don't worry, it's safe with me. Besides, If I tell, my own secrets out as well." I say slightly giggling. He doesn't look amused. "Rachel, I'll see ya in a bit k? When I get back we can hang out." Elly says grabbing her purse and walking out the door towards Danny as he kisses her on the forehead. "O, uh, ya. Sure. See ya." I say waving and locking the door behind him. Who is this guy? There must be something I need to find out about him if I'm having some dream about him. I've had it every night for about a week now, every since I found out about my "curse". I need to tell Elly about this, but how? How can I tell her without hurting her?

When Elly finally came home, I was already gone. Last night I ran away, leaving a note.
"El,
I have some stuff to sort out. But, I promise, once I figure out what this dream means, I'll come back. Don't worry.
-Rach"

My cell phone started ringing. Wait.... since when do I have a cell phone? O well. "Hello?" I say. "Rachel! Thank God you're okay!" a voice squeals. "El, of course I'm okay. Why wouldn't I be?" I ask. Sheesh, just because she's four years older than I am, that doesn't me that I'm immature. 'What kind of a question is that?" she retorts angrily. "I was worried about you! Anyways, what's going on? What's this note about?" "I-It's complicated... uh, got to go, see ya, bye!" I say as quickly as I can and hang up. I can't tell her. I just can't. I let out a deep sigh and lay down across the grass. Where was I supposed to go? I couldn't live in the playground, I get too hungry and start killing people for their blood. Should I move to a forest? Find a group of vampires to live with? I was hopeless and didn't have a clue where I should go or what I should do, so, I just went back home.

I opened the door and saw Elly on Danny's lap holding a can of beer. "Elly! O my God! What the hell is going on here?" I shrieked. She and all the guys she had over turned to look at me. "Shit!" she murmured. "O, uh, hey Rachel! Um, I didn't know that you were coming back!" she said innocently. "SO?!?!?!?!" I ask. That doesn't make what you're doing here either smart or legal or even mature!" I retorted. "Rach I-" "FORGET IT! I'm going to my room. Don't you dare come up and don't mess with me!" "But-" "DON'T!" I screamed and glared at her. What a jolly homecoming this was.

He's here again. Once again he's walking towards me.... but this time I can see something I didn't notice before. He's carrying a knife. "Danny, what are you doing?!?!" I shriek. "No, don't!" "Rach?" a voice asks. I open my eyes and in my surprise see Elly. "You were screaming again, but this time said something like "Danny no" or "Danny don't do it". What the hell is going on here?" she asks angrily. I won't tell her. I can't tell her. I just can't tell her. "Ding Dong." I look out the window. Shit, he's here. I have to tell her, but how?

"Hey, um... I'm going out for a walk, that okay?" I ask. "Oh...uh, sure." she replies. "Hey, wait a sec!" She calls just as I'm walking out the door. "Where you going?" "Oh, I won't be long, just on a quest of truth to turn us all back to humans again." "Great!" she replies, "Well, see ya!" "Uh, ya, see ya." she waves. This will never work. I never will be able to cure us, or come up with eh courage to tell her about my dream, my repetition.

I don't really know where I am, let alone how I got here. .... but I do know one thing. Danny, the same Danny whom is dating Elly and has been in numerous dreams of mine, is standing right before me. "You're Elly's sister, right?" he asks. "Uh, half sister, but, close enough." "ok." he replies and lets out a deep sigh. "Well, how'd you get here anyways. You have to be extremely powerful to be transported here, which you are obviously not." "What's that supposed to mean?" I ask somewhat insulted. "Well, do you have any power? Let me guess, you see the future? Then come, tell me what you've seen." he states mockingly. "I-I have to go. I shouldn't be here." I say scared out of wits. If I told him, he'd be sure to kill me. Then, I saw it, in his hand, something carved in it. Oh my God. No way.


Danny's the king vampire?!?!?! No way! I didn't even know there was such thing. "Now Rachel, you don't need to hide it. Though I do mock you, it's not because you don't have the potential my dear, it's just you're so young. If you do have a power though it would be fortune telling though, the cat eyes give you away. And, they'd have to be developed to let you come here so, obviously there's something important about you. So, what do you see?" he asked. As nice as he seamed, I knew I couldn't trust him. "Please, let me go home!." I screamed and started crying. I was so scared, you can't even imagine.

The next day, I awoke in my room. I guess Danny took me back. I felt something in my hand and moved it out from under the bed covers pulling out some sort of scroll. "What is this?" I wispered to myself aloud. I opened it up and started to read.

"Hello,
Whom ever you are, obviously there is something important you need to do. You will therefore have one wish granted to help you out on your journey. Good luck."

"This is so weird. Whatever, might as well give it a try." I say. "Here goes. I wish that Elly and I were human again." I said holding the scroll above my head. Out of nowhere a wind started swirling and my fangs dissapeared. The thing is, I felt that fear of Danny's presence grow 5 times more that it used to be. That's when I realized, If i would have stayed human, that knife from his dreamed couldn't harm either me or Elly. If I hadn't been so worried about becoming human, everything would turn out okay. Now that I was human, I was easy prey, and good as dead.

Leaving my room i saw Elly walking outside. "Hey, El, where you going?" I ask. "Oh, well, Danny called. There was something he needed to talk to me about." "Oh...." I replied. "Shit." I thought to myself. What am I supposed to do now? Seeing Danny is never a good thing, especially when we're human. I bit my lip and after Elly walked outside, started crying. It was the end, I could just feel it. Soon, someone was going to die.

I desided to take a nap while Elly was out. Maby it would calm me down. But, I was very mistaken. All that nap did, was bring an already frightening idea, quite a bit a realism. That night I predicted their conversation, and afterwards, saw the same dream I've seen millions of times before.

"Hey Dan, what's up?" Elly chimed. "Elly, I'm sorry but, I need to talk about something kinda serious." he replied sternly. "Awwww. Come on. Lets have a wittle bit of fun first." "No, seriously." he snapped. She let out a sigh. "Fine, but hurry up. I wanna enjoy this visit." "Doubt that'll happen." he murmered. "Excuse me?!?!" she screamed shocked. "Never mind. Let's get to the point. Are you aware to the one rule us vampires have?" he asked. "Of cource! Don't let any humans know about our existance or the human dies." she replied. "Exactly." he said in agreement. "Which is why I have to kill you, your sister, and is also why I killer her mother." he stated. Elly turned pail. "D-Danny, what are you talking about? So, Mrs. Rosenburg didn't abandom Rachel?" she wispered, unable to find and stength in her voice. He started chuckeling. "Nope, she loved Rachel." he said kinda of amused. "But what did you mean by having to kill Rach and I? We're vampire too! ..... aren't we?" "You were vampires." he replied. "I don't know what happened but, last night, that changed." She froze. "Which is why I have to kill you both." He pulled out a knife from behind his back and started walking towards her, and me. I was there somewhere. "That's it, I'm going to save her." I say, and get out of the covers. Wait..... I can't drive yet.

"Hello? Gabby? Hey, it's Rachel. Yup. Anyways, uh, can you get your brother to pick me up, I really need a ride. Oh, I'm at my dad's place. Yup, that's right. k, cool. You're a total life saver. K, see ya a few. Bye." I hung up the phone and let out a sigh of relief. But if only I would have told Elly about my dream. I'd have told her, we'd be fine. But, here I am. I also don't see why Elly went out with him. Even if they are the same age, he looks 14 since that's how old he was when he became a vampire. And well, she looks 17 since that's how old she is now, and she just became one. This is so messed up.
I looked out the window and saw a blue mini van. Thank God they're here.

"Rachel! Hey!" Gabby calls running after me, her brow hair flowing behind her. "Hey!" I squeal in reply squeezing her. "Thank god you came. I'm in a total crisis. A vampire is going to try and kill my sister and I and my sister think he's her boy friend and I have to save her and ugh, just, oh my god, it's so crazy you wouldn't even believe. I'm seriously thinking after this I'm moving in with you're family. No one with suck my blood there." I say. She just started, trying to figure out if I was joking or not. Finnally she screamed. "OH MY GOD! GET IN THE CAR GO, GO, ANDREW DRIVE!" she was seriously flustered. More so than I, and I was the one who was in danger. Now even more so. I had to not only save my sister, but keep Gabby and her brother Andrew from getting killed aswell. If I was to come out alive it would be a miracle.

As we sat in the car, going way over the speed limit, everyone was silent. I was just stressed trying to figure out what to do. It's practically imposible to kill a vampire. You either have to turn them human and kill them, be killed by a loved on or relative to a loved on, or have a spell cast on them, and though he did love Elly, he didn't anymore and i wasn't able to turn him human or cast a spell on him. How the hell was I supposed to do this?

The car ride was long, about an hour or so, so in the middle, I fell asleep. Once again I had my repetition, by once again, it had more to it, which frightened me.

"Hey Dan, what's up?" Elly chimed. "Elly, I'm sorry but, I need to talk about something kinda serious." he replied sternly. "Awwww. Come on. Lets have a wittle bit of fun first." "No, seriously." he snapped. She let out a sigh. "Fine, but hurry up. I wanna enjoy this visit." "Doubt that'll happen." he murmered. "Excuse me?!?!" she screamed shocked. "Never mind. Let's get to the point. Are you aware to the one rule us vampires have?" he asked. "Of cource! Don't let any humans know about our existance or the human dies." she replied. "Exactly." he said in agreement. "Which is why I have to kill you, your sister, and is also why I killer her mother." he stated. Elly turned pail. "D-Danny, what are you talking about? So, Mrs. Rosenburg didn't abandom Rachel?" she wispered, unable to find and stength in her voice. He started chuckeling. "Nope, she loved Rachel." he said kinda of amused. "But what did you mean by having to kill Rach and I? We're vampire too! ..... aren't we?" "You were vampires." he replied. "I don't know what happened but, last night, that changed." She froze. "Which is why I have to kill you both." He pulled out a knife from behind his back and started walking towards her, and me again. He's keeps walking and I see where I am finnally. I'm hiding under his bed. But it's huge! It's like, 5 beds put together and made of gold. He's still walking this way. I can't stand it, and squeeze my eyes such. I don't want to see my sister murdered. But out of nowhere, with my eyes still shut, I run out from under and open my eyes to see a great light. Then, I wake up. I look over and see everyone staring at me. "What?" I ask. "R-r-r-achel.... you a-a-a witch." Gabby stutters staring at me. "What?" I ask. "How did you come to that conclution?" "J-just now, right before you woke up, some weird light shot out of your hands. I-it looked like some sort of spell. What did you do?" I lay there is shot. I didn't know what to say. "I-I never knew before. but.... it does explain my dream." I mumble. "What? What dream?" Andrew and Gabby both ask in unison. I sigh. "Never mind. It's a long story."

We finnally arrived and I ran inside the building. The other's started to follow me, but I stopped them. "You guys, I have to do this alone. I'm sorry. I just, I want to save her. She's my sister. I am sorry. But wait outside and If I don't come out in an hour or so then, come in and check on me. k?" I asked. Then both nodded and I snuck in. I ran under the bed and everything went just as predicted. When I opened my eyes, I saw the light as knew I would, and I push him, getting a little too close as so his blade, went right through my heart. I screamed a blood curtling scream and heard people talking. "OH MY GOD! RACHEL! RACHEL SAY SOMETHING! RACHEL!" a voice cried. Then I heard footsteps of people running in. "Is she okay?" One asked. "Rachel? Speak to me! Please?" the other said crying, tears falling on me. I managed to open my eyes and see Gabby standing over me. "I'm fine. It was better this way. .... Elly, you, and Andrew are alive and, Danny is dead so-" In that very moment, I died.

"Where am I?" I asked myself. I seamed to be okay. I was floating in the air though, with sure isn't normal. I looked down and say my body. My golden hair lay across the floor and the eyes that typically sparked green lay dark and lifeless. But I knew, I knew it was for the best. Danny was going to kill us all, so better one that all of us. Also, he himself may have wanted to die soon being alive so long. Though it was hard to explain, somehow, it seamed, that though it was a sad day, I should rejoice, for I had died a hero.

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